Peer Critique

1.Mela Patel, Rashmi Patel, Pratik Patel
2.Mela Patel being grandam and mother immigrated from India. She is nice and caring to the poor people after all the poverty she lived in India.
3.22 paragraphs
4.926 words
5.9
6.Rashmi Patel and Pratik Patel
7."Ever since I was little my mom has told me to be grateful for what you have because in a matter of  seconds that can be taken,
8.end
9.It was a quote but yes it captured my attention.
10.Someone else form her family
11.the story is objective
12.No
13.A strong woman survived through poverty.
14.I think this story is well written. I liked the story mainly because the main source perspective was really good. Her opinions were agreeable.
15.91

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